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GX Gary Stu 2 by fluffy-the-wolf GX Gary Stu 2 by fluffy-the-wolf
'Nother Stu.

This is Jackie Yuki. He is the future son of Jaden Yuki and Alexis Rhodes. They meet him when he travels back in time because of a freak wormhole accident. (Explanation? What do I need that for?) He acts just like Judai and inherited Winged Kuriboh from him. Despite his skills, he chose to be in Osiris, because all the people in Obelisk were mean and snobby. (Remember kids, if someone is of higher rank, that automatically makes them an asshole.)
Everyone loves Jackie and is his best friend. They support his dream of becoming the next King of Games just like his father did. However, his teacher, Mr. Princeton (le GASP) doesn't like him for reasons unknown. Jackie is still nice to him in return.
Jackie tends to use Jaden's catchphrase and trademark pose every chance he gets. Lots of girls (and some guys) like him, but he's utterly oblivious to it.
:D Betcha' can't guess who Mr. Princeton is!

Before I get killed, I'd like to state two things:
One, just because your offspring OC looks like a clone of either parent, that doesn't make them a Gary Stu or Mary Sue. Acting like a clone of either parent makes them a Gary Stu or Mary Sue. (You lose extra points if they act like a perfect clone.) I have seen some look-alike offspring OC's that are actually credible in personality traits and back-story. So, I forgive the clone looks. Besides, it is common to look a lot like one's parent. (It'd be odd if you didn't.) However, my concern is why one would intentionally style their hair to look just like that of their parents'... (Jackie here is an exception from that. His hair is a combo.)
Two, this was not a bash at Fianceshipping. I happen to like that pairing, thank you very much. (I just haven't drawn it because I feel it gets enough attention from the fandom. I'm more focused on neglected pairings.)

One more thing in reguards to Jackie's back-story...why would Manjoume become a teacher? Just...why? He never indicated that's what he was aiming to do. He doesn't seem like the type. Why?

I know what some of you are gonna say, "What about Michiru, Ryuzo, and Amiko? Aren't they Sue's?" No. They aren't. Sure, all OC's have some Mary Sue/Gary Stu traits to them, but mine are not full out ones. Here's why:
1.) The only traits Michiru has in common with Judai is being oblivious to romantic feelings aimed at her (though, she seems to be able to detect it when it's aimed at others), preferring to make friends rather than enemies (mostly because Judai raised her that way; she is shown to have breaking points as shown by her outward dislike of Ren and grudge against Seinosuke), and being able to eat a lot (but that's really just with pizza). She otherwise is not a clone of him in personality. (Besides, she goes out of her way to make sure she's never late as often as he is. She finds it too embarrassing.)
2.) Michiru at no point is ever in Osiris. Ryuzo and Amiko are not portrayed as the only nice people in Obelisk. Plenty of others are shown to be nice too.)
3.) None of them are aiming to be the next King of Games. Amiko wants to be a chef, Ryuzo just wants to be a professional duelist, and Michiru has no idea what she wants to do yet.
4.) They all have lost quite a few duels before. (And not by default. Default losses don't count.)
5.) Michiru and Ryuzo never use their parents' catchphrases or any form of them.
6.) None of them have inherited any special cards from their parents. They have decks of their own. (Deck themes are still in pending.)
7.) Michiru is not the reincarnation of anything, let alone something related to Haou. She is actually a living carrying case for an intergalactic weapon simply called the Orb, which does her and everyone else more harm than good. (The Orb doing something good period is a rarity. It is meant as a weapon, after all.) She ahs little to no control over it, and all it ever does is destroy things when she's driven to a mental breakdown. The Orb is not a living thing, so it is not her alter ego in anyway. It is hooked up to her soul and acts on her emotions and what she subconsciously wants. Also, over usage in one sitting could kill her.

Jackie (C) Me

Yu-Gi-Oh GX (C) Kazuki Takahashi
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Friendship-Is-Derpy Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Jaden's in the corner just like "WTF"
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SonicXShadowX Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I always knew Jaden and Alexis would have a child.

Proof.

1. Alexis said that she was happy that jaden gets to stay.
2. At the end of the yugioh gx episode 180 (japanese) Asuka wrote "Lets meet again..somewhere ok?" And Atticus (i dont know his japanese name) wrote "I'll leave you to Asuka"
3. At episode 106 Blair gave Jaden a flirty wink and Alexis was not pleased.
4. In episode 161 and 162 Asuka was jealous when Rei and Judai joined at partners, At the nearly end of episode 162 Asuka was trying to say " Judai I..I..I Uhh im glad we met." But she was actually going to say "Judai I love you" But decided not to beacause Judai doesn't really know what is love,despite her thought.
5. In episode 15 when Harrington duelled Jaden for Alexis' heart,Jaden won. Once he won he walked to Alexis saying " Well Lex I guess im your fiancé" As you see Alexis Blushed without letting anyone see it including the watchers, but when Jaden finished his sentence he said " What does fiancé mean anyhow" which spoiled it and Alexis replied disappointedly " It means friend..well at least for now big guy" means they may be together one day.
6. When Dark magician girl came in episode 42 ( i think) Jaden won the duel with her, Jaden then says at the end " Its not easy to be the bad guy.." Alexis cheers him up by saying " Aww..sonetimes the girls like the bad guys" which corrospond (i dont know if its how you spell it) with jaden but wuickly covers it up.
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LadyZimaMythos Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Student General Artist
I kinda disagree. Just because a character is an OC doesn't necessarily mean they'll have Sue/Stu-like qualities. It just takes a skilled writer to develop them enough to that point.
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Um...I know that. This was a parody of lazy writing.
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LadyZimaMythos Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Student General Artist
*sigh* Alrighty...I just tend to see people who seem to bring up that point a lot, and it tends to annoy me. I didn't mean to accuse you of anything.
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's okay.

I have OC's too. I know fan characters be written well, I've seen plenty in several fandoms. But there are some that aren't, so this is what the picture was meant to parody.
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OceanFairie Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
I'm feeling the need to throw my two cents in on this. I know this poor Stu's nothing more than a joke, but yes, anyone who's an experienced OC owner should realize when it's time to make character development their primary partner. Thank goodness my Fianceshipping OC Takuya Yuki doesn't act like that. The only thing I'm guilty of, however, is the Winged/Hane Kuriboh business mainly because he does get one. However, his profile's getting revised in more ways than one.

Here's a pic of Takuya in case you're wondering what he looks like.: [link] The only reason he isn't in a Duel Academy uniform is because he's a 5D's OC and GX's Duel Academy isn't there anymore, not caring what the dub says. That was a stupid mistake on 4Kids's behalf.^^; Plus, he went to a different school as a teen.
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MayumiHimatori Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Uhh a gary sue you made yay! :D
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SamCyberCat Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
Oh yes. I see this sort of character around. A lot.

Though I really can't comment too much on him since I make lovechildren OCs myself. ^^; Though none for Juudai, because I just don't see him having kids personally. This sort of lovechild is very common for that pairing though, and I bet he's surrounded by friends that are mostly CanonxOC pairing lovechildren created as filler for JuudaixAsuka.
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What amkes me sad is this type of cahrcter doesn't ahve to be a total Sue/Stu. It's the lazy writing atht tursn them into it. Like I said, looking jsut like a parent isn't what amkes them a bad OC...it's acting just like the parent taht does.
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