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GX Mary Sue 2 by fluffy-the-wolf GX Mary Sue 2 by fluffy-the-wolf
Because people liked the first one [link] and because making parody Mary Sue's is fun!

This is River Tears. She was a hideous child, so her parents committed suicide, because they couldn't stand to look at her. She was left on the streets and was eventually taken in by a blind woman. River grew up beautiful and attracted many guys, but turned them dwon out of guilt of her former ugliness, which caused her parents such misery. She resorted to cutting, but hid the scars with her stockings and gloves.
She enrolled in Duel Academy and fell in love with Chazz Princeton, who was just as dark and tormented on the inside as her. But sadly, he was in love with the preppy snob, Alexis Rhodes, despite that she was already dating Jaden Yuki. Alexis often took advantage of Chazz's feelings, just to get him to do things for her.
This made River sad, so she started cutting again. But she cut herself so bad, she nearly bled to death. Chazz saved her by wrapping towels around her wounds and performing CPR. (Because that would totally work, right?) He cheered her up by telling her about how he used to cut himself, because his brothers abused him. River told him about her parents and he gave her a hug.
From that day on, Chazz helped River cope with her depression. River got more confident and decided to do something that should've been done a long time ago. She stormed in on Alexis's cheerleading practice and told her off. But Alexis beat her up with her pom-poms in retort. Luckily, Chazz saw this and stopped her. He told Alexis what a fugly bitch she is and that he loved River more.
So, they lived happily ever after, while Jaden also realized what a bitch Alexis is and dumped her for Syrus. (Yaoi, FTW!)

...okay, I'm done now, On to being serious.
This is a combo of two types of Sue's that REALLY annoy me; a Dub Sue and an Emo Sue. Emo Sue's try to say that they're Gothic, but you know the truth.
BTW, I hate it when people think Manjoume is some sort of "dark, tormented soul". Yeah, he obviously has issues, but "dark and tormented"? I just can't see it. While on the subject, I don't think his brothers abused him physically. Mentally and emotionally, yes. Physically? I really doubt that. The most we saw was Shoji grab him by the collar of his shirt, but other than that, nothing that alluded to past hitting. Hell, the grabbing his shirt collar just seemed like a typical "I'm really pissed at you, now pay attention!" type of thing. I don't think his brothers are that evil. (If something that serious were going on, we probably would've gotten a flashback or a line of dialogue about it. It's not one of those plotlines you just ignore like the elephant in the room.) I mean, haven't we already seen that they pressure him too much? I think that really just signifies mental abuse on some level.
Also, Asuka doesn't exactly seem like the "preppy" type to me, let alone "cheerleader".
Another thing, I hate it when people say Asuka takes advantage of Manjoume's crush on her. Dude? Asuka doesn't even like it when guys have crushes on her. Why would she take advantage of it? That's just OOC and beyond. She's not conniving.
So, yeah. Turns out, 90% of Mary Sue's are out to make sure the canon female characters wind up single and miserable...much like their creators. XD Oh! Yeah, I went there!

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XD That is the best Rei chibi I have ever drawn...

River (C) Me

Yu-Gi-Oh GX (C) Kazuki Takahashi
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DoduDindon Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"-she cut herself so bad, she nearly bled to death. Chazz saved her by wrapping towels around her wounds and performing CPR."

"Turns out, 90% of Mary Sue's are out to make sure the canon female characters wind up single and miserable...much like their creators."

Best. Lines. Ever. I lost it at the CPR part.

However, personally, I have nothing against the dub of GX or against dubs in general (unless the voice acting is absolutely TERRIBLE). It's just always seemed like such a trivial thing to rage over. Depends on the person, I guess.
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COMEDIC-Sidekick Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist
ROFL. Oh Mary~
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SharpshotJunkArcher Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
Just when I thought I was done laughing, I see this.
Right after Miyuki too.
Whoever you are, I salute you! :D
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D Thanks! Glad you liked my Mary Sue parodies!
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QueenWolf12 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hate Sue's like this. Plus, i hate the way everoyne thinks Jun is pysicaly abused. Reminds me of a conversation me and Sam had last night about Draco but that's another story.

He's brother have mentally abused him without a doubt. And mental abuse is just as bad as physical if you ask me.
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Alchemist-Jessica Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011
AWESOME! I totaly agree with you... I hate does pseudo "Goth" Mary Sues u_u and I also hate it when everyone says Manjoume cuts himself or worse... I mean, he complains about alot of things, ok...but he NEVER EVER says something like: "I hate my Life because of my brothers..." or something like that...
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live-love-ROCK Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011
lol i dont no which on i like better. can i shoot her too?
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Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010  Student Digital Artist
slice away rei!
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TokiKurp Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Hobbyist
Nice one XD

Izzy: I love her sytle :D
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The-Blue-Rabbit Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
Beware the Mary sue!! :ohnoes:
Who names their kid River Tears?
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A crappy writer.
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mazukiizvalkyriadmg Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
Rei: Asuka, grab the "Marry sue killer machine"
Asuka: Sure, i got it.
*BLOOD*
*this scene is to violent for any comment*
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:giggle: For some reason, taht makes me think of the auto Romeo maker from "The Demented cartoon Movie". LOL
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mazukiizvalkyriadmg Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
HEE HEE HEE!!! the only thing bad about this site- is there is real marry sues- like etsuko ajibana- or so i hear- i'm not 100% sure- i could be wrong- but if you know me- this is a little catch phrase of mine. " I AM OFTEN PROVEN WRONG.";)
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Seto1truluv Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
im bad 4 making these kind of mistakes but D:

OMG THE REI CHIBI!!! XDDD

but ya i personaly think that emotionl and mental abuse is worse nd causes more damge than physical D: but yea manjoume isnt like A TORTURED SOUL THAT CUTS HIMSELF ZOMG!!1! D:

and her hair is 2 preppi lol
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
River: it's not preppy! See, there's black in it. Preps hate black.
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Seto1truluv Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
o woops srry my bad!! xDD y not just black w/orange streaks? :3
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
River: Stop critisizing me! You want me to cut myself some more?
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Seto1truluv Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
n-no don't do that! D: your hair is super pretty nd i can ttly see why jun-kun loves you! @_@
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
River: Whos' Jun? i'm in love with Cahzz!

Manjoume: uh...sorry to tell you this, but I've already murdered my dub counterpart. He was pissing me off.

River: *cries* I'm gonna go cut myself! *runs*

Manjoume: Okay, but remember; it's dwon the road, not across the streat.

Asuka: Manjoume!

Manjoume: Waht? I'm just trying to help.
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SamCyberCat Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
Nothing beats chibi chainsaw mask Rei in terms of awesome! :D

This sort of Sue really bugs me too, but then that's to be expected. I've never understood this "Asuka takes advantage of Manjoume's crush" mindset because in the series it just showed that Asuka regarded the crush as a mild annoyance. But then people write Anzu taking advantage of Yuugi's crush too, so they'll write anything. -_-
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D I know, right?

90% of Suethors will pick any excuse to rag on female cahrcters; even if they have to make one up. (Which they usually wind up doing. That, or they'll just exaggerate on a small issue.)
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SamCyberCat Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
Every fandom I've been in has the same thing. And it's not just Sue authors, those in favour or one female character will do anything to prove the other is "evil". Like that terrible Rei bashing fic I read once where she used Martin as a tool and "cheated on Juudai" with him solely to break Asuka's heart. @_@
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, taht's juts ridiculous. Rei's not exactly conniving. If she were, I think we'd know.
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SamCyberCat Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
Plus, in the series her crush on Juudai was only even referenced a handful of times. o.o
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, she's not obsessed, or anyuthing. We've seen her focus on other matters.
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SamCyberCat Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
Like all that support she gave to the Martin side story. ^^
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:3 Yeah.
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nightshade43 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
There's only one thing I don't really agree with in your comments; not all Suethers are lonely little girls who are miserable.
Many I've seen are actually MARRIED thirty-two year old women who have a kink for Optimus Prime (poor fictional character)

Other than that I found this highly amusing XD
Even though I don't know anything about the universe.
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was just making a small jab. Trust me, what I said was decent compared to what most others say about Suethors.

Yeah, Mary Sue's are always fun, even if you're not in the fandom. =) Glad you enjoyed it.
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nightshade43 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
It's okay. I thought it was funny (because it's true sometimes).
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:giggle:
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nightshade43 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
oh and what is a "Dub" character?
Someone who uses the dubbed names of characters? (Because using Dub names shouldn't be considered such a horredus crime)
eg) Mindwipe's "proper" name is "Wipe", and I refuse to call him that (it reminds me of a nappy-wipe Oo), so I call him (and have my OCs call him) by his Dubbed name instead.
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Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student Digital Artist
oh no not again.....
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It never stops.
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Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student Digital Artist
oh my
0.0!!!
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MuyokoIchigo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
Good lord, I hate Sues like her...
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, they're almost as bad as the typical "preppy" Mary Sue's.
She was inspired by the ever-infamous Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way.
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MuyokoIchigo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
lol yeah! That sucks!

I hope though that I don't make a Mary Sue like that or I'll cry a little.

I've made a polygamist, but I feared I made her a Mary Sue (my brother calls her so.), so she has fears and stuff. She's lived a happy life though, so I doubt that makes her a Sue.
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What would amke her a Sue is if no one calls her out on the polygamist stuff and it was portrayed as an acceptable lifestyle. She must also ahve flaws that are acknowledged and not used as endearing traits. ^^; It's hard amking sure a cahrcter is not a Sue, huh?
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MuyokoIchigo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
Yeah it is hard.

Good thing I do have characters that call her out on it. My brother's character, Aburatsubo from Magic User's Club, and Cronos-sensei. I like Aburatsubo, Cronos-sensei I admit is a decent character, and my brother's OC? Well... He's the main character in my story as well as Misawa, and he seems to think Royalshipping is the true pairing in this story...

She has fears of disasters, and she does get depressed when she hears people know that, but tries to cover that up with her perkiness.

I've recently made a BLEACH OC...
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She sounds pretty balanced as a character.

^^; I'm not exactly a "Bleach" fan...but what's your OC like?
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MuyokoIchigo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
She's short, tomboyish... Lost her mom to a Hollow like Ichigo Kurosaki...

She sort of was asexual until Hanataro walked into her life.

Here's my assumption on what she'll be like if she were a Sue:
[link]

Here's some other references of her:
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:3 She's cute.
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Bablet16 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
OH A SUE! Naudia, can I keep it?

But Bablet, the torture chambers full up!

Aw crap. Guess I'll have to wait :)
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have plenty of time. Sue's never truly die.
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DarkRoseTheHedgie Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
can someone hand me my flamethrower? :icontwitchingplz:
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SpongeyDude Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2010
AGH! Fucking emos! Why must they always be annoying!? I'll slit her wrists alright...DOWN THE ROAD! *pulls out a chainsaw and starts swinging it in random directions*
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fluffy-the-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, great! You ruined my curtains!
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kari10101 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2010   General Artist
Geh, emo does not mean that the person acts depressed and shit. Hell, one could be the happiest person in the world and still be emo.

Also, Cam wants to join in on the killing of this one. She's giving red-heads a bad name.
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